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A lot of work needs to be done to get this to a decent encyclopaedic standard. The point of view in here is absolutely horrible; it's an encyclopaedia, not your opinion on characters. 'She was fearless' is point of view unless you have references to back it up. Perhaps an image of her Pelican is in order? The tenses need work too; I've changed it to past tense, as an encyclopaedia should be, and it'd be appreciated if people didn't write in present tense. In addition, the spelling's been fixed to conform to American English. --[[User:Darth tom|<span style="font-weight:bold; color:black">Darth tom</span>]] [[User talk:Darth tom|<span title="(talk)" style="color:black">(talk)</span>]] |
A lot of work needs to be done to get this to a decent encyclopaedic standard. The point of view in here is absolutely horrible; it's an encyclopaedia, not your opinion on characters. 'She was fearless' is point of view unless you have references to back it up. Perhaps an image of her Pelican is in order? The tenses need work too; I've changed it to past tense, as an encyclopaedia should be, and it'd be appreciated if people didn't write in present tense. In addition, the spelling's been fixed to conform to American English. --[[User:Darth tom|<span style="font-weight:bold; color:black">Darth tom</span>]] [[User talk:Darth tom|<span title="(talk)" style="color:black">(talk)</span>]] |
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| − | **And no, I feel no need to have my own personal name upon the template, thanks. --[[User:Darth tom|<span style="font-weight:bold; color:black">Darth tom</span>]] [[User talk:Darth tom|<span title="(talk)" style="color:black">(talk)</span>]] |
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Revision as of 08:51, 29 October 2008
Blind Jump
This article mistakenly says "blind jump" when the Pillar of Autumn made it to Threshold when cortana used the coordinates from an artifact. --JohnSpartan117 14:21, 28 September 2006 (UTC)
when does it say she used coordinates?
Keyes: But we made a Blind Jump, how did they?
Cortana: Get here first? Covenant ships have always been faster, as for tracking us all the way from REACH, well, at lightspeed my menuvering options were limited, sir.
Lt.O'Brien 16:36, 8 January 2007 (UTC)
- Keyes ordered Cortana to do a blind jump, but she used to coordinates she found instead, and didn't tell him. Everyone but Cortana thought it was a blind jump. -ED 17:36, 5 February 2007 (UTC)
Voice Over?
Does anyone know exactly who does the voice of Foehammer? Kap2310 02:28, 26 January 2008 (UTC)
Encyclopaedic
A lot of work needs to be done to get this to a decent encyclopaedic standard. The point of view in here is absolutely horrible; it's an encyclopaedia, not your opinion on characters. 'She was fearless' is point of view unless you have references to back it up. Perhaps an image of her Pelican is in order? The tenses need work too; I've changed it to past tense, as an encyclopaedia should be, and it'd be appreciated if people didn't write in present tense. In addition, the spelling's been fixed to conform to American English. --Darth tom (talk)